屍姦乳姦のシモ影新太郎@連絡・進捗報告垢 @chougeki

(進捗・ロール)ちょっととりあえずここまでやったんですが、とりあえず平行してちょこちょこいじりつつ…。いきます。下書き描き込んでいきます。

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@chougeki the draft looks good :D the size of the body seems good, I am relieved.
I would like to suggest 2 changes, see if it's possible? :air_no_hungry:

1) For first panel, instead of both penis pulled out, how about the bottom just finished cumming inside and starting to pull out? (cum spilling out)

1.5) also I am not sure if there are enough space.... maybe it would be more exciting if you show her egg getting fertilized? Don't worry if not enough space.

@chougeki 2) when Roll is hit by the rock, maybe add a bit more emotion on the face? like she feel the impact